This is in response to Thursday Poetry Writing Competition hosted weekly by H.R. Phoenix, an excellent blogger! This time we had to experiment with different kinds of poetry styles and to begin each verse with the same letter!
So, here I tried to employ slant rhymes, rich rhymes and eye rhymes. Throughout the poem the same rhyming sound of “…a…m” “…a…n” has been repeated and it is overflowing with Similes, thanks to ‘As’! 😅
I hope you’ll enjoy reading it and let’s see if you could guess about whom I’m writing before reaching till the very end! 😁
So, here we go…
As mysterious as the misty black night
As clear as the bright morning Sun!
As light as a humming bird’s feather
As heavy as a million Ton!
As smooth as satin silk
As hard as a sparkling Diamond!
As high as the infinite sky
As deep as the deepest Ocean!
As widespread as universe can be
As tiny as a Microorganism!
As swift as light travels
As slow as a poet’s soulful Rhythm!
As silent as silence can be
As loud as a chirruping Bedlam!
As brimming with life as elixir
As deadly as the strongest Venom!
As blazing as red hot iron
As soothing as a soft cool breeze on Burns!
As perfect as perfection can be
As perfect is the only One!
My God!
~Bhavya Malhotra
God has no end and no beginning. He is everything and He is nothing! How ironic it sounds but yeah it’s true…
May God bless you all! 💝😄😇
Nicely Penned…😁😁😁😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💞💞💞💞💞💞
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Aww… Thanks a lot Dipanjan!
How are you?
Waiting for the results like me?😉
Did you check out Write the World? I’d sent a link through What’s App. 😃
Too many questions I asked no? 😂
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Yeah, I am fine…😁😁
Nope, Results are in the hands of god…
Yeah, I checked the link but currently I have a lot of school work piled upon me so…😅😅
And, yes Too many questions…😂😂😂
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Haha… All the best for them! 👍
No problem. I understand online classes are just showering heavy rains of HW! 😂
Never mind the questions. 😛😁
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Okay…😂😂😂
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बहुत उम्दा रचना👌 मनमोहक👌
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आपका बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद!😊💗
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आपका लेखन बहुत ही अच्छा और हिंदी भी अपनी काबिल-ए-तारीफ़ है। 👌🌺🌺
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यह तो आपका बड़प्पन हैं! 💐😇
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नहीं नहीं यह आपकी काबिलियत है🙏
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💐💗
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🙏
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Wow!!!! 💙
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Thanks a lot Era! It’s so nice to have you here. 🙌
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☺☺
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The similes really enhanced the poetic essence of your thoughts. Well done! Really impressed by the artistic vibe that oozed out of your words 👏👌
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Your feedback is much appreciated! ❤
Glad to know that the vibes could knock the door of your soul! 😊
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Yes they absolutely did. Always a joy to read your words! 😊
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That’s very kind of you! 😄
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Zabardast
Shanndar
Fantastic 🙌🙌🙌
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Awww… Thanks Sachit! 😉
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This is beautiful Bhavya 😊
I loved this form of poetry ! Well done 😊
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Thank you Nima ji! 💗🌸
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Welcome Bhavya !! 🧡🧡
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Woooooooooooow!!! So awesome!!❤❤😍😍
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I’m glad you liked it! 😃❤
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Amazing poem!!
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Thanks a lot Aashi! 😃❤
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Welcome
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बहुत ही खूबसूरत रचना।👌👌
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Bahut bahut dhanyavaad! 😊
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स्वागत आपका।
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Wooow! Beautifully written loved your poetry!
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Thank you very much sir! Truly humbled by your kind words. 😃
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Omg…. This is so amazing🤩😍👍….. Each reference you gave for describing the one you wrote this poem about is really fantastic🤘😝🤘…… Your writings always take me to another world of imagination…. Keep writing 😘
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I’m glad I allow you to roam different worlds! 😁😄
Thanks you very much for your lovely comment Komal! ❤️🌹
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Yeah 😊…. You always do. … And now I am feelin’ like making a new sketch….. Thank you for the motivation
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Oh wow! Waiting for the new masterpiece… 😄👍
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So good, bhanu!
You presented the similes in such a way that I was actually able to imagine and feel for a moment.
Keep it up!!💜😍😎
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Ooh that sounds great!
Many thanks Chetna! ❤️🤩
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😈😸🙈
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Kya ho Gaya! Itne devilish expression kisliye Deviji? 😜
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Aapko dekhke aisi hi anubhuti hoti hai naa😝😈😁
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I want to send you that Hawww sticker but alas! WordPress doesn’t allow them 😂
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No alas!!
It’s good otherwise you would have blasted my comment section by now and vice versa!😝
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Definitely! 😛😂😂
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Wonderful poem.
Smile 🙂
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Thank you dear! 😁
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Beautifully Penned!
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Thank you very much Saniya! 🙂
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You’re most welcome.
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Facets of life and moments – like waves on the Ocean, a journey in all directions, expanding life in consciousness 🙂
Thank you very much for sharing this profound poem of yours, my dear friend Bhavya
All that is good for you and yours 🙂
May God bless you to
Didi
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“expanding life in consciousness”
Thank you very much for your wise words Didi! ❤❤😊
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Welcome, my friend and thank you too for your presence and support on my blog 🙂
Sending love and light to you 🙂
Didi
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I’ve received it with with so much happiness Didi 💕💕💕😃😃
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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This is so lovely. Thank you!
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Thanks a lot Kally! 😊
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As beautiful as always ❤ .
Hii Bhanu, Kundan here, your best friend is trying something new😅. I’ve switched my site to a new one….hope for positive responses when trying something different 😅 Wish me luck. And your poems rock as always 🤩🤩
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Aww… Thank you!!!
You remember my nick name, wow!
All the very best Kundan! ❤️❤️
I’m spending half of my day is on Write the world these days. So, I wasn’t much active here.
Today, in the evening I’ll come and visit you new site. 😀
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I don’t know I had been following you but now it is showing ‘Follow’ instead of ‘Following’. Is that because of new site?
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Yeah I had deleted the previous ones for a fresh start😅
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Oh I see.
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