Read it slowly, feeling the sensations!
It all happened in a SECOND!
Vision obscured, engulfed in pitch black
What else do you expect?
When your eyes are shut like that!
The back of my hand,
Yelped and squealed in pain.
Were a hundred sharp needles inserted at once?
Or the Basilisk had jabbed its poisonous fangs!
Was that an electric wire?
Or thunder had just kissed my hand
My veins, once so full of blood
Appeared to drizzle out drop by drop…
Was I freezing or melting?
My mind had no inkling!
One SECOND seemed to stretch for an hour
Caves of my eyelids opened their mouth
To take in the despicable sight
Painted on the retina of my eye
The balloon of my pride lay popped
Since, finally I’d become the quarry
Of the black monster, fancied by none!
My hand jerked & wriggled out of its iron grip.
A ruddy fresh bubble oozing out of my skin…
For me, it was nothing short of SURPRISE
After all, I’d endured this year’s FIRST mosquito bite!
— Bhavya Malhotra
So, now you know what had happened! 😂😂😂
You’re invited to share your experiences with these little friends who inhabit the Earth with us! It’s not that I fancy them very much but can’t make myself detest them either! It’s in their nature to suck blood and the best we can do is to protect ourselves from their nasty bites.
Well, I hope you’ll have a good day without discovering one perching on your skin!😀😂
🔥🔥😂😂😍naiceee onee bhanu♥️
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🤣 Yeah! I hope it’s not buzzing around your ear!
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What an explanation… I was… really… for a moment thought about dementors then other creepy things… Cause I’m reading hp 4 these days……. What an ending… Amazing 👏
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I’m on the same ⛵ boat Ashee…
Revisiting Hogwarts and reliving in the wizarding world😀😀
Glad it could bring out those feelings…
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👍🏻
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Wow Bhavya very nice .. I like it.. ✌️
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Thank you Shreya!🙂
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Creative 🙂
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Thank You! 🏵️
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I totally did not see that coming ! Not many have the talent to exaggerate a mosquito bite 😂😂
I would love to read more posts like this ❤ Keep blogging !
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Well when they come so near you, you get tempted to their beauty! XD (Now you know I am working from laptop)
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I see what you did there. “XD” indeed ! 😂
Totally. I admire their beauty even when they’re perched on my hand like a bird on a branch.
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Then you can have a mosquito in your diaries!
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Good idea ! I’ll add a new draft right away, so that I don’t forget in the future. Thanks for the amazing idea !
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My pleasure dear! By the way, are you in sciences? Because you said you’re preparing for entrance, so I thought maybe…
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Yes. I am. PCMC group 🙂
Preparing for JEE
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Well, same here! All the best!! :))
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All the best to you as well !
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Well, I think I know how to make emojis using laptop keys.
🙂 😐 xD
You just need to type them and press space button. Each one of them would have only specific letters…
The above ones I’ve done using laptop :))
Two of them didn’t work LOL!
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I know only to do the smiley face with a colon and a right bracket. How about the other emojis ?
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I’d browsed on internet and there’s a list of such codes which we can type and create the emojis.
You’ll find that on internet! 👍
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Thank you, Bhavya ! I’ll check it out, right away 🙂
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😊👍✨
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Very beautiful poetry.👌👌
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I’m grateful! 🙂
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Hillarious elucidation of a mosquito bite 😂
I couldn’t guess in the beginning as to what caused so much of pain to find the answer in the very last line…….and I was literally surprised to know a mosquito bite led your pen paint his experience with your skin😂…….but yes I agree with you, their bites actually are very painful.
Good job!
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😂😂😂
Yes indeed they’re the black monsters.
Thanks for your kind words Kundan! 😊
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Beauty in a mosquito bite😂! This was awesome.
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Thank you very much Anisha! 😁😁😂
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Pleasure is all mine!
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Wooooow!! This is really awesome!❤❤😍😍
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I’m so happy you felt that! 😀😀💖😍
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Really enjoyed this poem😂
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That’s great! 😁😂
Thanks for visiting Aashi! ♥
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Oh Wow!!! 😍😍😍
Thank you dear Phoenix!
I’m highly obliged and happy! 💖💖😊😊💐
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